First Time Here....Be Nice - Page 14

EdgeVox · 04-28-2004, 12:31 AM

Bathed in whiskey
Dressed all in black
Finally free from the cruel sun's eyes
Intoxicated on Jesus' blood
This is how I'll always remember you

Wrapped in moonlight
Hellfire in your eyes
Sinning never felt so enthralling
This is how I'll always remember you

Bloodshot and torn
Scarlet tears fill my sunrise
I'll never hold you again
I've never wanted so much to forget you..

beegee · 04-28-2004, 01:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox
Intoxicated on Jesus' blood

yes.
wine.
that's absolutely brilliant.

give this place a good kick in the ass for me, texas.

my_kite · 04-28-2004, 06:07 PM

Hey boy...you are way talented!! Deep thoughts...I loved to read your stuff!! You do have a huge pain inside of you, isn't it?? It's so alive in those words!!!

So...

Bury your pain deep down inside the ground
Is your turn to laugh, to find yourself a way
Silence is not the way, it�s to damn dirty and brown
So write it all right here, spell the words that wanna stray
It�s time to make some piece, some quite thoughts and happy thrills
Under the sunny sky that melts our hearts and souls sometimes
It�s time to set away the pain, and all the scary chills
It�s up for us to choose which wings are those who flies
It�s time to find the answers
Not to stare away and wonder why
To neutralize the hurt and break down the barriers
Those that mostly dark our lands and sky
Come on boy, and spit it out
We�re here to read what�s inside you
Your talented way to shout
The things that make you feel no good

Love
Tania

EdgeVox · 05-01-2004, 02:37 PM

Standing room only
Empty church
Sunglasses on
Nuclear suicidal lust
Thunderstorm warning
Drive into absolution
Can't shake these blues
Can't shake these blues
Where the fuck are you?

EdgeVox · 05-13-2004, 04:03 PM

So afraid I'll never see those diamond eyes again...

EdgeVox · 06-17-2004, 07:49 PM

It's 3:35 am and my city's on fire
Needle in my arm and gasoline through my veins
The world's coming on end all around me
I've got you on my mind, girl, and it ain't sweet
Had my heart in the gutter ever since you left it there
Got no flowers in my head, just pussy and Bukowski
You better run babe if you ever want to touch the sky
Bullets in my sweat and broken bottles in my soul
I never should've left you girl
I never should've left you girl
Let's drink broken kisses and breathe fire
Got nothing left for you steal
Dancing on rusty nails
My darling my sweet, my paen to misery
I'll always love you even as you're killing me
Even as you're killing me

my_kite · 06-17-2004, 07:51 PM

That's simply beautiful!! I wonder...is that kinda love real??

I wanna be loved like that!!

cONGRATS !! vERY VERY GOOD!!

my_kite · 06-17-2004, 07:55 PM

CAN i SHARE A BIT TOO??

The streets are shinning like the broken glass
With no wind, or rain, or dust to hurt my eyes
The sunlight burst throughout the wet grass
The one that kept the dream of no goodbyes

The breeze, I can feel it in my bones
It blows so out of range, without control
With no shame, so cold, just like the stones
No shame to freeze my heart and mind and soul

Still building the same old country club
The wanted place with no sorrow or pain
The one we used to go to find that fresh release
Freedom we hardly found, but still remains

Cute Irish Bono · 06-18-2004, 05:24 PM

That's good. It seems like is it about hope, is that true?

EdgeVox · 06-20-2004, 08:20 AM

Take a bow
And I know
That you'll always have that damned halo
I yearn for that tainted immunity
I worship your dirty deeds
I'm so sorry I wasn't there to catch you
I'd die to catch you before the night embraced you
I'm so sorry darling
I'm so lost without you
If you're my compass
And you're drowning
There's no finer place than hell
You're my blue altar
You're my favorite purgatory
I'll serve til he's satisfied
Satanic empathy
How much is that worth
I miss you already......

beegee · 06-27-2004, 12:01 AM

damn.

how did i miss this.

i'm stunned.
just at a glance i can see.

i am going to read them again and be back with my thoughts.

not that they matter much ... but what the hell.

EdgeVox · 07-12-2004, 10:28 PM

Almost lost a brother
Almost lost a brother
God has a hell of a way of getting your attention
I'm never going to be caught off guard again
I'm never going to let you taunt me from the other side
Take me down?
You can fucking try it...

beegee · 07-13-2004, 10:48 AM

you really should start a journal.

this place is overrun and your work gets buried.

EdgeVox · 07-20-2004, 10:32 AM

Ain't it strange to know that I'm a few hours away from your rainfall
Ain't it cruel that you wouldn't warn me
Ain't it funny the way you make me smile even while you're tearing us down
You always had it in you girl
You always had a mean streak and a killer smile
Or was it the other way around
Shake those blues, baby girl
Shake those careless lovin blues

Ain't it true the way the heart remembers the scars only
Ain't I a fool for falling for you
Trade up Texas skies for New York steel
Won't make no nevermind
Not with your love hangin' over me
Ain't it true you'll haunt me til the end of my days
I can't wait

beegee · 07-22-2004, 10:56 AM

later, texas. enjoy new york.

this is beautiful.

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...

those careless lovin blues...

06-18-2004, 05:24 PM	#204
Cute Irish Bono Rock n' Roll Doggie Band-aid Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Texas Posts: 4,591 Local Time: 12:24 PM	That's good. It seems like is it about hope, is that true? __________________ "Amen, amen, I say to you, you will weep and mourn, while the world rejoices; you will grieve, but your grief will become joy." - John 16

07-13-2004, 10:48 AM	#208
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 10:24 AM Images: 1	you really should start a journal. this place is overrun and your work gets buried. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

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04-28-2004, 12:31 AM	#196
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	Bathed in whiskey Dressed all in black Finally free from the cruel sun's eyes Intoxicated on Jesus' blood This is how I'll always remember you Wrapped in moonlight Hellfire in your eyes Sinning never felt so enthralling This is how I'll always remember you Bloodshot and torn Scarlet tears fill my sunrise I'll never hold you again I've never wanted so much to forget you..

04-28-2004, 06:07 PM	#198
my_kite War Child Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Portugal Posts: 550 Local Time: 06:24 PM	Hey boy...you are way talented!! Deep thoughts...I loved to read your stuff!! You do have a huge pain inside of you, isn't it?? It's so alive in those words!!! So... Bury your pain deep down inside the ground Is your turn to laugh, to find yourself a way Silence is not the way, it�s to damn dirty and brown So write it all right here, spell the words that wanna stray It�s time to make some piece, some quite thoughts and happy thrills Under the sunny sky that melts our hearts and souls sometimes It�s time to set away the pain, and all the scary chills It�s up for us to choose which wings are those who flies It�s time to find the answers Not to stare away and wonder why To neutralize the hurt and break down the barriers Those that mostly dark our lands and sky Come on boy, and spit it out We�re here to read what�s inside you Your talented way to shout The things that make you feel no good Love Tania

05-01-2004, 02:37 PM	#199
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	Standing room only Empty church Sunglasses on Nuclear suicidal lust Thunderstorm warning Drive into absolution Can't shake these blues Can't shake these blues Where the fuck are you?

05-13-2004, 04:03 PM	#200
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	So afraid I'll never see those diamond eyes again...

06-17-2004, 07:49 PM	#201
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	It's 3:35 am and my city's on fire Needle in my arm and gasoline through my veins The world's coming on end all around me I've got you on my mind, girl, and it ain't sweet Had my heart in the gutter ever since you left it there Got no flowers in my head, just pussy and Bukowski You better run babe if you ever want to touch the sky Bullets in my sweat and broken bottles in my soul I never should've left you girl I never should've left you girl Let's drink broken kisses and breathe fire Got nothing left for you steal Dancing on rusty nails My darling my sweet, my paen to misery I'll always love you even as you're killing me Even as you're killing me

06-17-2004, 07:51 PM	#202
my_kite War Child Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Portugal Posts: 550 Local Time: 06:24 PM	That's simply beautiful!! I wonder...is that kinda love real?? I wanna be loved like that!! cONGRATS !! vERY VERY GOOD!!

06-17-2004, 07:55 PM	#203
my_kite War Child Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Portugal Posts: 550 Local Time: 06:24 PM	CAN i SHARE A BIT TOO?? The streets are shinning like the broken glass With no wind, or rain, or dust to hurt my eyes The sunlight burst throughout the wet grass The one that kept the dream of no goodbyes The breeze, I can feel it in my bones It blows so out of range, without control With no shame, so cold, just like the stones No shame to freeze my heart and mind and soul Still building the same old country club The wanted place with no sorrow or pain The one we used to go to find that fresh release Freedom we hardly found, but still remains

06-20-2004, 08:20 AM	#205
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	Take a bow And I know That you'll always have that damned halo I yearn for that tainted immunity I worship your dirty deeds I'm so sorry I wasn't there to catch you I'd die to catch you before the night embraced you I'm so sorry darling I'm so lost without you If you're my compass And you're drowning There's no finer place than hell You're my blue altar You're my favorite purgatory I'll serve til he's satisfied Satanic empathy How much is that worth I miss you already......

06-27-2004, 12:01 AM	#206
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 10:24 AM Images: 1	damn. how did i miss this. i'm stunned. just at a glance i can see. i am going to read them again and be back with my thoughts. not that they matter much ... but what the hell.

07-12-2004, 10:28 PM	#207
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	Almost lost a brother Almost lost a brother God has a hell of a way of getting your attention I'm never going to be caught off guard again I'm never going to let you taunt me from the other side Take me down? You can fucking try it...

07-20-2004, 10:32 AM	#209
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 795 Local Time: 12:24 PM	Ain't it strange to know that I'm a few hours away from your rainfall Ain't it cruel that you wouldn't warn me Ain't it funny the way you make me smile even while you're tearing us down You always had it in you girl You always had a mean streak and a killer smile Or was it the other way around Shake those blues, baby girl Shake those careless lovin blues Ain't it true the way the heart remembers the scars only Ain't I a fool for falling for you Trade up Texas skies for New York steel Won't make no nevermind Not with your love hangin' over me Ain't it true you'll haunt me til the end of my days I can't wait

07-22-2004, 10:56 AM	#210
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 10:24 AM Images: 1	later, texas. enjoy new york. this is beautiful. beautiful, beautiful, beautiful... those careless lovin blues...