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EdgeVox · 05-11-2001, 07:20 AM

hey whoever's out there please respond.....I'm almost at the end of my rope...I'm desperately trying to negate my own self-loathing......self-pity and martyrdom do not go hand in hand.....disregard.......permiate....as another number fades into statistic....I beg of thee for acceptance if not so much disdain....love me for who I am if not for who I will be........love all before you fade into the horizon of mediocrity...

EdgeVox · 05-11-2001, 07:30 AM

in tears I write my own epitaph
is there nothing sacred
you'll never know another life

help me before I negate my passion
I was never worthy of your love
welcome my vultures to my feast of failure
it'll bring joy to those that never tried
one more downed soul
use my failure to inspire thy self
forget me and follow
remember me and better thyself

I'm sorry I'm sorry I was not better
I'm sorry I did not fulfill my potential
Love me for what I am
Not for what I could've been
I did my best
be content
you had the best of a dead soul
I'm sorry.....

Bacchus · 05-11-2001, 10:50 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:

help me before I negate my passion

welcome my vultures to my feast of failure

it'll bring joy to those that never tried

remember me and better thyself

you had the best of a dead soul
I'm sorry.....

just had to edit your words to fill my own deep black hole; there isn't a sound loud enough, no crowd cross enough to drown out the sorrow of this world we have built only to tare down in a moment of rapture. It takes the dying to be born into our true self, souls unbound and free to roam this our ever tearfull mother earth; thank you so much for your words of freedom...

Redemption songs, cause all i ever had, redemption songs

come on, come on, be good to me, show me the meaning of true self loathing so i may be born anew in this my raging spirit

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The heart that is soonest awake to the flowers is always the first to be touched by the thorns.
Thomas Moore, 1779�1852

ultraviolet299 · 05-20-2001, 05:53 PM

Edge, what shall i say to you. I have now seen a glimpse of your dark soul. I never would have known if i did not read your stuff. Poetry is cool that way, u can see right to the core of a person.. all the stuff that they dont say.
As i told u before, i think your writing is very intense. Keep doing it.

EdgeVox · 05-25-2001, 03:42 AM

You'll never know me in the next life
I am cinder
On my knees I seek understanding
Love is always just a shout away
You'll never find a more understanding lover
If only we knew each other

Is it so trite to offer you my soul
Would it make a difference to die in your stead,
I'd trade my eyes for circumstance
Please dawn on my lips
You trade my nightmares for anecdotes
You refresh my libido
I beg to be your triviality

Indifference is the enemy of passion
So let be known that I am your servant
To know me is to know devotion
I love you, god help me
I'd die for you
All you'd need is to ask....

Bacchus · 05-25-2001, 04:05 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:

I'd trade my eyes for circumstance
Please dawn on my lips
You trade my nightmares for anecdotes

Indifference is the enemy of passion
...

this is one of your best EdgeVox, so much raw emotion is hard to capture within poetry... yet i must say you do it with ease; your words speak of a noise rarely heard with these infant ears. Thank you for opening up so much SOUL@@

...always remember, silence must be heard...

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The heart that is soonest awake to the flowers is always the first to be touched by the thorns.
Thomas Moore, 1779�1852

EdgeVox · 05-25-2001, 04:26 AM

Would you notice my absence
Would you feel incomplete
Is there nothing redeemable in my life
So much hurt

Spin in my grave
anonymity by trade
Soothe my fears
Drink my pain
I wish I could give in return

Let's fuck our troubles away
You know I'm good for it..

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 05-25-2001).]

voxxie · 05-25-2001, 05:00 AM

nice!!!

i wish that i could write so long poems even in spanish

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

Bacchus · 05-25-2001, 06:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:

Let's fuck our troubles away
You know I'm good for it..
{05-25-2001}.]

couln't have said it better myself, oh, wait;i thought i did... maybe it was just one of 'em things that burn the wire through the radio waves... thankz againj

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The heart that is soonest awake to the flowers is always the first to be touched by the thorns.
Thomas Moore, 1779�1852

zooropamanda · 05-27-2001, 08:13 AM

hey edgevox...

you are allowed to open another thread to post your stuff!

its ok, we'll let ya!!

these have all been so very honest
i love honest poetry

popkidu2 · 05-27-2001, 09:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:
mediocrity...if that's the case...

Through a Cell phone I hear you crying
you know I'm still trying- to get a fix on things

It's You and Me and World War Three
You know and I know how it's going to be- we'll lose out in the end

Remember when you told me everything would turn out right
I didn't know I'd have to put up such a fight- to find my way back to the middle

Quote:

I need you to overlook my cons,
Which surely outweigh the pros
I need to know that you won't let me go,
I need to know that you won't leave me for a better man,
I'll be worth it, I know I can try to make you happy,
Will good laughs ever compensate for happiness
My soul in exchange for patience, not an even trade by far,
I need you to fight on my side in this war for my selfishness

It's You and Me and World War Three,
pick a side, wherever you'll be, you'll see me,
Shooting at me, both sides lose, but you'll be free
Free from my mediocrity, maybe that was the plan all along.....

EdgeVox · 05-29-2001, 01:52 PM

I hate having to look at that first post I did....emphasizing it only makes it worse

EdgeVox · 06-13-2001, 04:11 AM

Loved you in that memory
When you tried to stay awake
Couldn't get up if I tried
Put your ears to the ground,
you'll hear me running from my troubles
I can't hold you anymore
You're lost to me, Another name in a morbid history book
Wish it was last year
Got no reason to smile at another sunrise
You'd best leave me in my selfishness
fuck I don't know

EdgeVox · 06-17-2001, 07:35 AM

You're made for my lips
You're built for my soul
The only one that could stand me
I love you
I need you
Without you I'd cut my scarlet ropes

My identity and life depend on your disposition,
A kiss to you is a formality, to me it's a necessity,
My love is an unconscious infinity....
You'll never be alone

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 06-17-2001).]

zooropamanda · 06-17-2001, 11:12 PM

I like this one Edgevox..

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05-11-2001, 07:20 AM	#16
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	hey whoever's out there please respond.....I'm almost at the end of my rope...I'm desperately trying to negate my own self-loathing......self-pity and martyrdom do not go hand in hand.....disregard.......permiate....as another number fades into statistic....I beg of thee for acceptance if not so much disdain....love me for who I am if not for who I will be........love all before you fade into the horizon of mediocrity...

05-11-2001, 07:30 AM	#17
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	in tears I write my own epitaph is there nothing sacred you'll never know another life help me before I negate my passion I was never worthy of your love welcome my vultures to my feast of failure it'll bring joy to those that never tried one more downed soul use my failure to inspire thy self forget me and follow remember me and better thyself I'm sorry I'm sorry I was not better I'm sorry I did not fulfill my potential Love me for what I am Not for what I could've been I did my best be content you had the best of a dead soul I'm sorry.....

05-20-2001, 05:53 PM	#19
ultraviolet299 Acrobat Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: Montreal/TO, Canada Posts: 327 Local Time: 07:38 PM	Edge, what shall i say to you. I have now seen a glimpse of your dark soul. I never would have known if i did not read your stuff. Poetry is cool that way, u can see right to the core of a person.. all the stuff that they dont say. As i told u before, i think your writing is very intense. Keep doing it.

05-25-2001, 03:42 AM	#20
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	You'll never know me in the next life I am cinder On my knees I seek understanding Love is always just a shout away You'll never find a more understanding lover If only we knew each other Is it so trite to offer you my soul Would it make a difference to die in your stead, I'd trade my eyes for circumstance Please dawn on my lips You trade my nightmares for anecdotes You refresh my libido I beg to be your triviality Indifference is the enemy of passion So let be known that I am your servant To know me is to know devotion I love you, god help me I'd die for you All you'd need is to ask....

05-25-2001, 04:26 AM	#22
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	Would you notice my absence Would you feel incomplete Is there nothing redeemable in my life So much hurt Spin in my grave anonymity by trade Soothe my fears Drink my pain I wish I could give in return Let's fuck our troubles away You know I'm good for it.. [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 05-25-2001).]

05-25-2001, 05:00 AM	#23
voxxie The Fly Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: round there Posts: 133 Local Time: 01:38 PM	nice!!! i wish that i could write so long poems even in spanish ------------------ a mexican poet, but not a very good one

05-27-2001, 08:13 AM	#25
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,516 Local Time: 05:38 AM	hey edgevox... you are allowed to open another thread to post your stuff! its ok, we'll let ya!! these have all been so very honest i love honest poetry

05-29-2001, 01:52 PM	#27
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	I hate having to look at that first post I did....emphasizing it only makes it worse

06-13-2001, 04:11 AM	#28
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	Loved you in that memory When you tried to stay awake Couldn't get up if I tried Put your ears to the ground, you'll hear me running from my troubles I can't hold you anymore You're lost to me, Another name in a morbid history book Wish it was last year Got no reason to smile at another sunrise You'd best leave me in my selfishness fuck I don't know

06-17-2001, 07:35 AM	#29
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 01:38 PM	You're made for my lips You're built for my soul The only one that could stand me I love you I need you Without you I'd cut my scarlet ropes My identity and life depend on your disposition, A kiss to you is a formality, to me it's a necessity, My love is an unconscious infinity.... You'll never be alone [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 06-17-2001).]

06-17-2001, 11:12 PM	#30
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,516 Local Time: 05:38 AM	I like this one Edgevox..