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EdgeVox · 12-17-2002, 04:10 AM

It's a sad day
The day you and I realized we don't know each other
Part of me is glad
I find that whole "life goes on" philosophy so trite
I'll always be around
I'll always play the fool
Sleepwalking into the sea
Drowning's the key
With every wave
With every step below me
I know I'll find some truth
Cold truth
I wouldn't have it any other way
Clouds cover my ever awkward step
Sunshine blinding my mistakes
I'm ever grateful
Embraced by miles of oblivion
Anonymity, where's the honor in that?
I miss you, my love
Without you I'd just as rather sink to the bottom
Another forgotten statue leftover from history
That's what I'd prefer........never having existed
That's what I'd like to be remembered for
The man that loved you desperately
The fool
The poor soul that couldn't cope
As the wave's crash,
One less grain of salt in the hourglass of remembrance
I love you so much.....

EdgeVox · 12-17-2002, 04:19 AM

Awake sweet lady,
Awake to the new death's sunset
Cynicism's favorite treat,
I use you fortuitously my darling
You keep me sane
You keep me whole
You keep me holy
Jesus had nothing on you
The faith you inspire in me
Because of you God exists to me
Without you, lawless barren souls roam my earth
It has to make sense
It has to amount to something
What a cruel cruel joke
The ruse of signifigance
I believe in love
I believe in love
I believe in you
I won't give up on my faith
I won't turn away from grace
I won't deviate from the inner workings
Your inner truth
My life's fuel
My only truth
My darling, My grace
Baby, I won't ever let you go
I won't ever let you down
I won't ever stray

EdgeVox · 12-17-2002, 04:29 AM

Open your glass sleet
Realize that we're here whether we like it or not
Victimized by your diamond hazeled eyes
I love you so much it hurts
Embracing the cliches
Drowning amongst the true
I come up for air
Only to realize that life is overrated
Place a nail in my heart
Give my life purpose
Give me signifigance
Give me soul
Can't do it, can you?
Not consciously anyway
I regret to inform you that I never existed anyway
That this never happened
This is a dream
Wake up
Wake up
Before you sleep amongst the stars
Before you slide amongst an avalanche of love's existance
Wake up
Before you don't matter

EdgeVox · 01-09-2003, 03:55 AM

Time's about to stop for us both
You and I will swing in oblivion
Nothing but the company of your sorrows
I can't wait
You know I always loved you
You knew this when you broke my heart
Not sure I can blame you
Well that was fun
Can we do this again sometime?
I enjoy my misery
I thrive on it
If you're there with me
It's worth it
There's nothing like being in love
It's the only time I feel close to god
Well I've gotta go
The future is calling
New loves, new friends, new dreams,
Everything's not the same
I love this
I'll never forget you though
You'll always be my favorite sad story
Actually no, I changed my mind
Fuck you
Fuck the past
Kiss the future
I've died too many times at your request
Resurrection's my cliche
I love this....

EdgeVox · 01-30-2003, 06:41 AM

You always seemed to know when to quit,
You couldn't help it
Guess we were just raised differently
I couldn't help but notice I've caught fire
Swirling flames consume my apathy
I'm not about to give in
I'm not going to apologize
I'm not going to say I was wrong
I'm not coming down
I'm not coming down
A kiss on the forehead is all I can muster
Guess I'm shy after all
You say it's time to call it a night
I say we should never sleep again

EdgeVox · 02-04-2003, 02:16 AM

Couldn't come down
Couldn't get up
Not til you realized it was all upside down
Jump on my train
Slipslide in vain
It's not what we wanted

You couldn't love without knowing
Had to have your hand on the clock
Slightest movement describes my fate
Karma's laughter is my last embrace

It's all over now love
Things will surely be better in the next life
I'll hold on tightly to what I know
I'll hold on tightly now, love
You know you're the only one, for me
Ahhh aah love
You're not strong enough

So darling smile for me now
You know how to get me drunk on you
Spinning down
It's inside out
My love
I'll never let you down
My soul
Worth your escape
One of us will survive
I'm glad it's you
My chances aren't worth your eyes

It's all over now love
Things will surely be better in the next life
I'll hold on tightly to what I know
I'll hold on tightly now, love
You know you're the only one, for me
Ahhh aah love
You're not strong enough
Just wait.......

EdgeVox · 02-04-2003, 02:20 AM

Let's wreck our souls tonight
Drink til the day's first light
What's sleep to us anyway?
I can't think of anyone I'd rather waste my life with.....

hiphop · 02-04-2003, 07:08 AM

Whew. Good stuff, EdgeVox. Respect.

EdgeVox · 02-23-2003, 03:17 AM

Rock bottom feel alright
When it's anywhere near you
I can't see through my drunken jealousy
I like the sound of your waves crashing on my idealism
Your corruption feels real

I love driving drunk through your rain
Can't wait to crash into your walls
You're my favorite death

EdgeVox · 03-05-2003, 11:32 AM

EdgeVox · 03-08-2003, 03:46 AM

I didn't think you'd notice
When I strayed
My temporary kismet,
My false security
You know me better than that,
You know all my intentions,
I just want to negate your existance
I just wish you were never there
I just wish you were never my life
I can't, can I?
How naive could I possibly be
What a goddamned cliche I turned out to be
The bitter sunset brings zero comfort
The sky brags of independence
I wish I was a falling star
Content in my melancholy trajectory
It would be so easy to spend my life
Lamenting my downfall
I miss you my grace
My strength
Harbringer of God
Without you Heaven is an afterthought
I don't care
I don't care about karma
I don't care about Christ
If you're not there
It means nothing to me
It means nothing to me......

beegee · 03-08-2003, 11:05 AM

i just spent my morning reading seven pages of your poetry.

beautiful, beautiful work. your talent is incredible.

now...give us more.

EdgeVox · 03-08-2003, 08:11 PM

I'd give anything to see you smile
I'm not worth your trifles
You're my ocean
My soul's yours
I'd kill for you
My only love,
You make it so easy for me
You erase my scars
You are purity personified

EdgeVox · 03-08-2003, 08:21 PM

Wishing you were someone else
Stuck here by myself
Nothing but my blues and a deck of cards
Things could've been different
I could've made you happy
I'm sorry life is a sad lady
I'm sorry god is dead
I'm wishing you and I were away from all of this

I just want to be happy and I can't wait anymore
I can't give anymore
The rivers run dry,
The sun goes over your tears
I just want to be happy
I want some fucking grace
Gimme some truth some love
Don't tell me it's cliched
You've got some nerve making me love you
You've got some nerve

beegee · 03-08-2003, 08:38 PM

edgevox, your work is very powerful.

03-05-2003, 11:32 AM	#100
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Last edited by EdgeVox; 03-05-2003 at 11:36 AM..

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beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 10:57 AM Images: 1	i just spent my morning reading seven pages of your poetry. beautiful, beautiful work. your talent is incredible. now...give us more. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

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12-17-2002, 04:10 AM	#91
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	It's a sad day The day you and I realized we don't know each other Part of me is glad I find that whole "life goes on" philosophy so trite I'll always be around I'll always play the fool Sleepwalking into the sea Drowning's the key With every wave With every step below me I know I'll find some truth Cold truth I wouldn't have it any other way Clouds cover my ever awkward step Sunshine blinding my mistakes I'm ever grateful Embraced by miles of oblivion Anonymity, where's the honor in that? I miss you, my love Without you I'd just as rather sink to the bottom Another forgotten statue leftover from history That's what I'd prefer........never having existed That's what I'd like to be remembered for The man that loved you desperately The fool The poor soul that couldn't cope As the wave's crash, One less grain of salt in the hourglass of remembrance I love you so much.....

12-17-2002, 04:19 AM	#92
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Awake sweet lady, Awake to the new death's sunset Cynicism's favorite treat, I use you fortuitously my darling You keep me sane You keep me whole You keep me holy Jesus had nothing on you The faith you inspire in me Because of you God exists to me Without you, lawless barren souls roam my earth It has to make sense It has to amount to something What a cruel cruel joke The ruse of signifigance I believe in love I believe in love I believe in you I won't give up on my faith I won't turn away from grace I won't deviate from the inner workings Your inner truth My life's fuel My only truth My darling, My grace Baby, I won't ever let you go I won't ever let you down I won't ever stray

12-17-2002, 04:29 AM	#93
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Open your glass sleet Realize that we're here whether we like it or not Victimized by your diamond hazeled eyes I love you so much it hurts Embracing the cliches Drowning amongst the true I come up for air Only to realize that life is overrated Place a nail in my heart Give my life purpose Give me signifigance Give me soul Can't do it, can you? Not consciously anyway I regret to inform you that I never existed anyway That this never happened This is a dream Wake up Wake up Before you sleep amongst the stars Before you slide amongst an avalanche of love's existance Wake up Before you don't matter

01-09-2003, 03:55 AM	#94
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Time's about to stop for us both You and I will swing in oblivion Nothing but the company of your sorrows I can't wait You know I always loved you You knew this when you broke my heart Not sure I can blame you Well that was fun Can we do this again sometime? I enjoy my misery I thrive on it If you're there with me It's worth it There's nothing like being in love It's the only time I feel close to god Well I've gotta go The future is calling New loves, new friends, new dreams, Everything's not the same I love this I'll never forget you though You'll always be my favorite sad story Actually no, I changed my mind Fuck you Fuck the past Kiss the future I've died too many times at your request Resurrection's my cliche I love this....

01-30-2003, 06:41 AM	#95
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	You always seemed to know when to quit, You couldn't help it Guess we were just raised differently I couldn't help but notice I've caught fire Swirling flames consume my apathy I'm not about to give in I'm not going to apologize I'm not going to say I was wrong I'm not coming down I'm not coming down A kiss on the forehead is all I can muster Guess I'm shy after all You say it's time to call it a night I say we should never sleep again

02-04-2003, 02:16 AM	#96
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Couldn't come down Couldn't get up Not til you realized it was all upside down Jump on my train Slipslide in vain It's not what we wanted You couldn't love without knowing Had to have your hand on the clock Slightest movement describes my fate Karma's laughter is my last embrace It's all over now love Things will surely be better in the next life I'll hold on tightly to what I know I'll hold on tightly now, love You know you're the only one, for me Ahhh aah love You're not strong enough So darling smile for me now You know how to get me drunk on you Spinning down It's inside out My love I'll never let you down My soul Worth your escape One of us will survive I'm glad it's you My chances aren't worth your eyes It's all over now love Things will surely be better in the next life I'll hold on tightly to what I know I'll hold on tightly now, love You know you're the only one, for me Ahhh aah love You're not strong enough Just wait.......

02-04-2003, 02:20 AM	#97
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Let's wreck our souls tonight Drink til the day's first light What's sleep to us anyway? I can't think of anyone I'd rather waste my life with.....

02-04-2003, 07:08 AM	#98
hiphop Rock n' Roll Doggie ALL ACCESS Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: in the jungle Posts: 7,205 Local Time: 07:57 PM	Whew. Good stuff, EdgeVox. Respect.

02-23-2003, 03:17 AM	#99
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Rock bottom feel alright When it's anywhere near you I can't see through my drunken jealousy I like the sound of your waves crashing on my idealism Your corruption feels real I love driving drunk through your rain Can't wait to crash into your walls You're my favorite death

03-08-2003, 03:46 AM	#101
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	I didn't think you'd notice When I strayed My temporary kismet, My false security You know me better than that, You know all my intentions, I just want to negate your existance I just wish you were never there I just wish you were never my life I can't, can I? How naive could I possibly be What a goddamned cliche I turned out to be The bitter sunset brings zero comfort The sky brags of independence I wish I was a falling star Content in my melancholy trajectory It would be so easy to spend my life Lamenting my downfall I miss you my grace My strength Harbringer of God Without you Heaven is an afterthought I don't care I don't care about karma I don't care about Christ If you're not there It means nothing to me It means nothing to me......

03-08-2003, 08:11 PM	#103
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	I'd give anything to see you smile I'm not worth your trifles You're my ocean My soul's yours I'd kill for you My only love, You make it so easy for me You erase my scars You are purity personified

03-08-2003, 08:21 PM	#104
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 12:57 PM	Wishing you were someone else Stuck here by myself Nothing but my blues and a deck of cards Things could've been different I could've made you happy I'm sorry life is a sad lady I'm sorry god is dead I'm wishing you and I were away from all of this I just want to be happy and I can't wait anymore I can't give anymore The rivers run dry, The sun goes over your tears I just want to be happy I want some fucking grace Gimme some truth some love Don't tell me it's cliched You've got some nerve making me love you You've got some nerve

03-08-2003, 08:38 PM	#105
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 10:57 AM Images: 1	edgevox, your work is very powerful.