First Time Here....Be Nice - Page 9

beegee · 03-20-2003, 10:13 PM

this line "wake up...before you don't matter"

all day, this thought stayed with me. it speaks to me in so many ways.

Achtung_Bebe · 03-21-2003, 02:19 AM

hey i'm glad to see you're still writing... nice, deepy, heavy stuff(but that's to be expected). Just one thing though--this is hardly your first time here, the subject line LIES

p.s. did you ever get my email from my new account i wonder... i'd write you again and fill you in on stuff but I'm not confident that you'd get it

**sorry to use your thread for something other than praise

EdgeVox · 03-21-2003, 03:45 AM

BEBE!!! no I never got your email.......where have you been I called and left a completely bogus name like Engelbert or something......your sister was not amused....

EdgeVox · 03-21-2003, 04:03 AM

Haven't had a good girl in a while
Mostly empty dresses in prominent smiles
I miss your laugh
Your circumstancial eyes
When did you decide to leave me dry
Was it when I was too in love to notice
You knew I'd be stubborn
You knew I'd be too wrapped up in you to care
Keys in your pocket all along
I love you for leaving me behind
Makes me want you even more
The dirt kicked up by your departure
Makes me mourn my naivette
You knew I'd never change
Thought you'd flinch before me
Can't really claim victory when it's all the same
I chose you over God
Don't regret it
Don't repent
You're the best thing that's ever hurt me
Sadistic spirit
Uneventful love
Saw it coming
Turned away
Will you take my hand when it all burns down
Will you help me burn it all down
I'd tear it all down for you
I'd tear myself down for you
Your kerosene love
Your eyes of flame
Love, I can't let you go

beegee · 03-21-2003, 10:50 AM

you can attribute this honest review to my lousy mood...

i think you can do better than this.

EdgeVox · 03-21-2003, 11:27 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by bonosgirl84
you can attribute this honest review to my lousy mood...

i think you can do better than this.

bonosgirl84,
I appreciate the honesty, I prefer it......I wrote that after I got home from the bars....not sure what I think of it.....I think the ending came out pretty cool.....why are you in a lousy mood? it's friday

beegee · 03-21-2003, 11:34 AM

aaah, the bars. yes. the keepers of all that is cliche'.

who cares why i'm in a lousy mood?

write another poem.

EdgeVox · 03-21-2003, 11:39 AM

"keepers of all that is cliche"....Right.

beegee · 03-21-2003, 11:45 AM

sarcasm?

i meant it...but you must disagree.

ah, well...back to your poems.

EdgeVox · 03-21-2003, 12:00 PM

so you don't have aim....do you have yahoo messenger or icq or anything like that

beegee · 03-21-2003, 12:09 PM

bonosgirl arrives at the crossroads, flicks her cigarette into the dirt, looks the devil straight in the eye and says this...edgevox has AOL.

Achtung_Bebe · 03-22-2003, 04:22 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox
BEBE!!! no I never got your email.......where have you been I called and left a completely bogus name like Engelbert or something......your sister was not amused....

haha strange I never got the message from Engelbert... Well I've been here and there, but obviously you were here when I was there & vice versa.. anyway I can't see why you wouldn't have received my email, is it still the same? and I haven't called b/c I thought the number had changed... I would check on this myself in the profile but that feature is disabled on my end it seems.

well i'm moving as of today (gradually settling in) so my # and stuff will change so let me know here or try sending a message to rockstartled@rock.com

if you can fit it in between writing such brilliance that is

EdgeVox · 03-22-2003, 04:25 AM

hey bebe what's your number

Achtung_Bebe · 03-22-2003, 04:28 AM

hey that was quick... well I don't have a new number yet. Besides I'm online so I can't get calls anyway... what's yours?? Don't dodge the question either.

EdgeVox · 03-22-2003, 04:30 AM

dodge the question? foolish fap......same number as I had in austin

03-20-2003, 10:13 PM	#121
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 02:32 PM Images: 1	this line "wake up...before you don't matter" all day, this thought stayed with me. it speaks to me in so many ways. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

03-21-2003, 10:50 AM	#125
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 02:32 PM Images: 1	you can attribute this honest review to my lousy mood... i think you can do better than this. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

03-21-2003, 11:34 AM	#127
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 02:32 PM Images: 1	aaah, the bars. yes. the keepers of all that is cliche'. who cares why i'm in a lousy mood? write another poem. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

03-21-2003, 11:45 AM	#129
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 02:32 PM Images: 1	sarcasm? i meant it...but you must disagree. ah, well...back to your poems. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

03-21-2003, 12:09 PM	#131
beegee Shadow Boxer Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: southern nevada Posts: 9,024 Local Time: 02:32 PM Images: 1	bonosgirl arrives at the crossroads, flicks her cigarette into the dirt, looks the devil straight in the eye and says this...edgevox has AOL. __________________ Strung out like some Christmas lights Out there in the Chelsea night

03-21-2003, 02:19 AM	#122
Achtung_Bebe New Yorker Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Beneath the noise, below the din Posts: 2,853 Local Time: 04:32 PM Images: 6	hey i'm glad to see you're still writing... nice, deepy, heavy stuff(but that's to be expected). Just one thing though--this is hardly your first time here, the subject line LIES p.s. did you ever get my email from my new account i wonder... i'd write you again and fill you in on stuff but I'm not confident that you'd get it **sorry to use your thread for something other than praise

03-21-2003, 03:45 AM	#123
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 04:32 PM	BEBE!!! no I never got your email.......where have you been I called and left a completely bogus name like Engelbert or something......your sister was not amused....

03-21-2003, 04:03 AM	#124
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 04:32 PM	Haven't had a good girl in a while Mostly empty dresses in prominent smiles I miss your laugh Your circumstancial eyes When did you decide to leave me dry Was it when I was too in love to notice You knew I'd be stubborn You knew I'd be too wrapped up in you to care Keys in your pocket all along I love you for leaving me behind Makes me want you even more The dirt kicked up by your departure Makes me mourn my naivette You knew I'd never change Thought you'd flinch before me Can't really claim victory when it's all the same I chose you over God Don't regret it Don't repent You're the best thing that's ever hurt me Sadistic spirit Uneventful love Saw it coming Turned away Will you take my hand when it all burns down Will you help me burn it all down I'd tear it all down for you I'd tear myself down for you Your kerosene love Your eyes of flame Love, I can't let you go

03-21-2003, 11:39 AM	#128
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 04:32 PM	"keepers of all that is cliche"....Right.

03-21-2003, 12:00 PM	#130
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 04:32 PM	so you don't have aim....do you have yahoo messenger or icq or anything like that

03-22-2003, 04:25 AM	#133
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 04:32 PM	hey bebe what's your number

03-22-2003, 04:28 AM	#134
Achtung_Bebe New Yorker Premium Gold Member Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Beneath the noise, below the din Posts: 2,853 Local Time: 04:32 PM Images: 6	hey that was quick... well I don't have a new number yet. Besides I'm online so I can't get calls anyway... what's yours?? Don't dodge the question either.

03-22-2003, 04:30 AM	#135
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 796 Local Time: 04:32 PM	dodge the question? foolish fap......same number as I had in austin

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