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07-01-2008, 05:32 PM
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| War Child  Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Slovakia
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Local Time: 07:23 PM | in dali's country Hi, I wrote this poem or song some time ago, just decided to post it here.. I would really appreciate any comments whether it's good or bad, or whether you like it or not. Thank you. They showed us three Moons Coming together into one Turning the sky so strange Purple, pink and blue Colours everywhere We stopped and watched Three Moons coming together the sky was so different that day the picture of the sky changed see the three eyes on a face without a mouth a spaceship above our heads someone disembarks the ship we were standing down hear the strange voice? See the strange face? And we realized we were in a country of Dali but didn't know the bloody thing they just put the honey on tounge and catch us in cage yeah, they chose the best place in front of the supermarket cathedral what is a saint place in this new age… colours were everywhere colours were everywhere but it was just an ilusion to make us been theirs |
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07-29-2008, 07:11 PM
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| Jesus Online Premium Gold Member  Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: a glass castle
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Local Time: 04:23 AM | Words aren't my thing usually, but this was great because it got me imagining and so on. Great stuff!
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08-01-2008, 12:02 AM
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| The Fly Join Date: Sep 2007
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Local Time: 05:23 PM | Quite nice man, it take me through that ilusion.  |
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11-08-2008, 11:35 AM
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| War Child Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Slovakia
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Local Time: 07:23 PM | Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you liked it.  |
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