Just As

dismantleme · 02-09-2007, 01:59 PM

I wrote this the other day tell me what ya think:

Patience is necessity just as necessity sometimes takes patience
Seeds yearn for water just as pure water yearns for the seed
The tune searches for the singer just as the singer searches for the tune
Wisdom takes experience just as experience gives birth to wisdom
Beauty of soul gives joy just as a soul of joy gives beauty
Life is about love just as love is about the essence of life
Standing tall and firm gives courage just as courage gives one the strength to stand tall and firm

SpiritofLilght · 05-22-2007, 11:30 AM

Dismantle, nice poem!

May we all have the patience
to gain the wisdom
to know that love is the answer to most everything
when we have the courage and strength
to let reflect the beauty of us as eternal souls

02-09-2007, 01:59 PM	#1
dismantleme The Fly Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Posts: 73 Local Time: 12:31 AM	Just As I wrote this the other day tell me what ya think: Patience is necessity just as necessity sometimes takes patience Seeds yearn for water just as pure water yearns for the seed The tune searches for the singer just as the singer searches for the tune Wisdom takes experience just as experience gives birth to wisdom Beauty of soul gives joy just as a soul of joy gives beauty Life is about love just as love is about the essence of life Standing tall and firm gives courage just as courage gives one the strength to stand tall and firm Last edited by dismantleme; 02-09-2007 at 02:15 PM..

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05-22-2007, 11:30 AM	#2
SpiritofLilght The Fly Join Date: May 2007 Location: West Coast Posts: 79 Local Time: 04:31 AM	Dismantle, nice poem! May we all have the patience to gain the wisdom to know that love is the answer to most everything when we have the courage and strength to let reflect the beauty of us as eternal souls