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Old 01-01-2008, 07:16 PM   #1
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Velvet

This is a song I wrote quasi-recently. It has a jazzy-nightclub-"Feelin' Good" vibe to it, musically.

You slide up to me
Your velvet touch, I feel in love
Your red eyes glowing
You paint deception up like trust

You pull the wool over my eyes
You're the devil in disguise

You whisper to me
"Do what you will, it'll be a kill"
I can't stop listening
Chasing after emptiness and thrills

You pull the wool over my eyes
You're the devil in disguise

Mommy tell me of praying hands
Just before I sink
Sister pull me back to dry land
Pull me out of the sea
Daddy is there forgiveness for the
Things that I've done?
Brother will I live to see the
Light of the sun?


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Old 01-02-2008, 11:02 AM   #2
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Very nice, I really like it.


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